Canuckles-Clock's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Analogs Ep 1]

you can do better,

1. the speech was way too fast.
2. the music kept cutting out.
3. try to use more detail in your backgrounds
4. the colors of the background hurt my eyes, take a look at sqeezy's work for an exellent idea of how to color backgrounds (paler colors)
5. the jokes were funny, but as I mentioned before, the speech was too fast, the jokes couldnt sink in.
6. all in all a decent flash, with some work i could see great things from you in the future.

-Canuckles

PS: I voted five because i want to see this survive, i know many people will vote low because it is a clock movie.

Vranny responds:

Lots of people (as you'll see if you read the review) <3 the fast clock voices. I'll try to remember to use pale coloured backgrounds.